Dear Mr Dastagir ,

My name is Yohanes Haileyesus and I am in 7w1p. The issue I would like you to tackle is the use of mobile phones during the  school day. I think it’s an important issue because the pupils don’t concentrate and they become distracted easily when mobile phones are involved.

We shouldn’t be allowed to use our electronic devices unless we have permission from our teachers.

In the English department, we have the privilege of being able to use our electronic devices and online blogs to make it easier for our teachers to mark, edit and publish.  It’s easier for us student to do our work instead of wasting paper and writing work more than twice.

At the same time I think we should be able to use our mobile phones to look up the definitions of words if there aren’t  enough dictionaries, or  to research or look at pictures related to the work.

As I menetioned before, I think we shouldn’t be allowed to use our electronic devices because teachers might think or catch us pupils doing irrelevant and innapropriate things on the Internet. Another reason why  we shouldn’t be allowed because its part of school policy unless we  are told to bring our electronic devices. Like in English, we bring our devices because we were told we can to use our online blog on Edutronic.net.

I think Edutronic.net is a good website because its a lot easier for us kids and teachers to comment and write on. It is created by the head of English Mr.Waugh.

Therefore  its  a lot easier for staff in the English department other staff to post homework instead of wasting paper. Edutronic saves a lot of time for pupils and staff.

In addition, we shouldn’t be allowed to use our electronic devices because we might be playing games. We might be texting our friends  things in lessons and disrupting them. It doesn’t matter if they’re in the same class or not. If we text our friend in another lesson, their phone will make a notification sound and they will get in trouble for  their phones or playing with it with out permission. For example”Do you want to go to Tesco after school to buy so sweets?”

In addition,some of the boys might be texting their friends irrelevant things and might annoy them by cussing their family or culture,background. That’s why this is  a issue in school. Really In Truly, it should be delt very quickly otherwise it will escalate, and boys might not listen to the teachers and they will suffer server consequences and sanctions. For example: being put in repheral or beet Pin externally excluded etc. That’s why this is a issue in a school with high standards.

The importance of this issue is major. Otherwise the situation will get WORST. If this isn’t solved, the school standards might drop because of this specific issue. In addition, some teachers will have to change their expectations of the studenstudents.

If the school’s standards drop down, the students will tell their parents and the students will leave because of the school, and the parents apetite will change of the school, it’s most likely that some staff will leave because of the way they are being treated and the disgusting attitude they are seeing and hearing.

Yours sincerely

Yohanes Haileyesus 7W1P.

English class Mr North room 217